This review is also posted on Sab The Book Eater.I did it. I can't believe I did it. I actually finished Shatter Me. I wanted to read this so bad but at the same time I didn't. You can see reviews of this book that are polar opposites. Shatter Me is a book that you either super love or super hate. I'm a bit in the middle and I'll tell you why.Okay so the story starts off pretty good because you really see the inner workings of a teenage girl's mind. One who's been imprisoned in an asylum for nearly a year and doesn't know affection. The first couple of chapters were enough to pique my interest because it got me wondering about Juliette's backstory, where her power came from and what exactly happens when she touches people. It was interesting, I'll give it that. But the writing ticked me off after reading a few more pages. The writing's... new. Original. Cuckoo. Juliette talks in a very weird way as far as young adult novels go. She repeats words again and again and again to emphasize her point. Shetalkslikethissometimes a lot and it annoyed me to no end. There were plenty of strikethroughs in the beginning that, fortunately, lessened towards the end. I kind of liked them because they were what Juliette wanted to say or what she was thinking. I think it's a fresh style in writing that makes me somehow like the book. Then there's the excessive use of 'and' and lack of punctuation. Sometimes I feel out of breath reading a whole paragraph of run-on sentences. So she's been in the asylum far too long that she's all kinds of crazy. Fine. But don't even get me started on the ridiculous and awkward metaphors. A lot of people complained about the utterly disappointing metaphors and I understand why.Exhibit A:"I catch the rose petals as they fall from my cheeks, as they float around the frame of my body, as they cover me in something that feels like the absence of courage.""Every organ in my body falls to the ground.""My eyes are 2 professional pickpockets, stealing everything to store away in my mind.""He shifts and my eyes shatter into thousands of pieces that ricochet around the room, capturing a million snapshots, a million moments in time.""I always wonder about raindrops. I wonder about how they’re always falling down, tripping over their own feet, breaking their legs and forgetting their parachutes as they tumble right out of the sky toward an uncertain end."Let's not forget all the dirty things these hormonal teenagers say.Exhibit B:"You're absolutely delicious when you're angry." "Too bad my taste is poisonous for your palate." "That detail makes this game so much more appealing.""You don't know it yet, Juliette, but you are a very bad girl,""And he's breathing harder than I am and suddenly his lips are on my neck and I'm gasping and dying and clutching at his arms and he's touching me touching me touching me..."WOAH STOP RIGHT THERE. Honestly, Juliette. When you repeat 'touching me' it sounds like something else. *wags eyebrows* I just couldn't catch a break! Every page is filled with this! I'm all for creative writing but you have to know when to stop driving your readers crazy. But... maybe that's what Mafi was going for. Drive readers crazy, as crazy as Juliette. Bingo. In all fairness though, the story gets better once Juliette cracks under Warner's psychopathic rule. You just have to get used to or get past the writing style. Numb yourself. You could actually use it for a drinking game. For every time Juliette repeats a word, drink a shot. Juliette describes her make out sessions with Adam in a really non-PG way, drink a shot. Juliette says a weird ass metaphor, drink a shot. You'll be drunk before you make it halfway Fun times.I don't even know what to think of Juliette. She's whiny, insecure and obsessive but I just chalk it up to being friendless and locked up for so long. She's this super girl one minute, unafraid of pulling triggers but then she's also this weak girl desperate for affection. It just doesn't add up. So no, I don't know whether I like her or not. I could like her mental instability if she stuck with the crazy girl image. Otherwise, what is she? She can't be both girls. And Adam....bland. So bland. No swooning here, nope.What did I like about the book? Oh yes, I found something I actually like about Shatter Me! Juliette's crazy but her power was cool. Amid the crazy writing, Mafi described Juliette's life sucking power in a very... beautiful way. Beautiful. It was intense and I like it. Even if it was mentioned once. Boo! I also like the last quarter of the book where the story unravels and gives readers something to look forward to in the sequels. And to some extent, I also like Warner in all his psychopathic awesomeness. I know fans are shipping Warner and Juliette but right now I don't see how I could possibly like them together. Them getting together... that's just too much crazy. I have yet to read Unravel Me to see why everyone ships them.If you're looking for a good dystopia then you might want to steer clear of this book. You definitely won't get the same substance and world building one can find in The Hunger Games or 1984. I think the insta love and constant self-pitying overpowered whatever potential this book has. I'd still read the next book though because I like torturing myself. No, seriously. I'm just curious how the story would pan out in Unravel Me. Hey, at least Mafi gave me something to hang on to.